survival: the only option

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by the reconstructionist (lucifer doesn't exist. he is only the planet venus personified!) on Wednesday, 10-Jun-2009 1:33:36

The hunter suppressed
the mind grows.
The emotions of rage, hatred destroyed.
the cataclysm near.
reconstructing the mind-space
conforming into a new shape.
Emotionless, cold and calculating,
always looking for escape routes; paranoid.
Crisis, mutulation of selfdestruction of the mind-center.
soulless, controled by survival
secrecy the goal
no mater the consequences.
Material wealth of destruction; the final act of the autamoton

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Wednesday, 10-Jun-2009 11:19:56

This is strangely beautiful! It's almost like describing a robot or machine, and survival is the remote control. The survival helps it get by, makes it do only what it needs to do, and nothing more. Risks are not considered because survival is the only thought. That's the way I perceive this anyway. This is very nice.

Post 3 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Wednesday, 10-Jun-2009 12:51:49

Hmm. Agrees with degressive. Sounds awesome! It could make a good song, movie charictor, or something Arnold would do! Lol!